I like it. Beautiful impressions of motion, and I like the difference in detail in the talons and head compared to the wings . . . it really looks good right at this point, complete as simple lines, sorta reminiscent of Chinese ink paintings, the simple compositions of the Southern School.

It kinda looks like it should be drawn 4x5 to 8x10 inches big, somewhere off-center in a 5'x6' or so piece of paper, in a simple frame, with a four-figure price tag attached.